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Title: SCHOOL UNIFORMS DEBATE
Introduction:
Opening sentence
| Identity is reflected by the clothes one wears. |
Context, claim,
key terms
| Too much attention put on clothes prevents a better focus on essential things such as studies and school work. |
Evidence/citation
| ‘’You are what you wear: what your clothes reveal about you’’. Baumgartner, J.(2012). You Are What You Wear: What Your Clothes Reveal About You. New York, NY: Da Capo Lifelong Books. |
Paragraph 2: Findings 1
Main idea
| Students put focus on school when they have a uniform. |
Evidence/citation
| ‘’school uniform can improve learning by reducing distraction, sharpening focus on schoolwork and making the classroom a more serious environment, allowing students to perform better academically.’’
Spencer C. What’s the Point of School Uniform?. 2013 Oct 3. Available from https://www.theguardian.com/education/mortarboard/2013/oct/03/why-wear-school-uniform.
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Paragraph 3: Findings 2
Main idea
| Students do better when they have a uniform. |
Evidence/citation
| University of Houston survey:
grades increased by 3 percentile points after uniforms had been introduced in their school.Do Uniforms Make School Better?. (2018, June 11). Retrieved from https://www.greatschools.org/gk/articles/school-uniforms/.
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Paragraph 4: Findings 3
Main idea
| When what you wear is not an issue anymore for students, il clears their minds for more important things. |
Evidence/citation
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The opinion from a credible source, Hillary Clinton: "Take that [clothing choices] off the table and put the focus on school, not on what you're wearing."
Should Students Have to Wear School Uniforms?. (2018, October 10). Retrieved from: https://school-uniforms.procon.org/.
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Paragraph 5: Conclusions
Main idea
| Every student attending a school should wear a uniform which would increase their focus and increase their grades. |
Evidence/citations
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Spencer C. What’s the Point of School Uniform?. 2013 Oct 3. Available from https://www.theguardian.com/education/mortarboard/2013/oct/03/why-wear-school-uniform.
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Paragraph 6: Recommendations
Main idea
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Evidence/citations
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Spencer C. What’s the Point of School Uniform?. 2013 Oct 3. Available from https://www.theguardian.com/education/mortarboard/2013/oct/03/why-wear-school-uniform.
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